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compositions
Lohiau Thu Mar 04, 2010 3:03 am
here you can share your compositions(poems/songs/etc.) that you wrote...
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Gail...my personal brand of rhum
Lohiau Thu Mar 04, 2010 3:07 am
miya milk…mei coffee…gail liquor
when i was a child, i always thought that milk was the best for me, but then as months passes by she doesn’t get sweeter, she turns sour and unlikely, and she surely upsets my stomach, now i dread her as if i was lactose intolerant.
when i though that i was a grown up, i tried to stick with coffee. it was different from milk, for it is brown and it has a unique sweetness. day after day i absorb her until my nerves aren’t feeling so good and she seems to give me anxiety which is awful, and makes my tummy acidic so i had to avoid her.
not a month to pass i turned to liquor, first you’d give an absurd taste in my tongue, 2 seconds and now i think you taste great. and unlike coffee and milk, you have you’re own spirit and personality and i can have consecutive shots of you in a day, and you’d eventually give me this intense, good feeling and when i’ve had too much of you, you make me dizzy, slur my speech, and all of my inhibitions are expressed easily with you. then you’d knock me down but with a grin in my face that would apparently show my satisfaction of you, and the joy i have with you.
alcoholic na ako..haha
---remember this berry?
when i was a child, i always thought that milk was the best for me, but then as months passes by she doesn’t get sweeter, she turns sour and unlikely, and she surely upsets my stomach, now i dread her as if i was lactose intolerant.
when i though that i was a grown up, i tried to stick with coffee. it was different from milk, for it is brown and it has a unique sweetness. day after day i absorb her until my nerves aren’t feeling so good and she seems to give me anxiety which is awful, and makes my tummy acidic so i had to avoid her.
not a month to pass i turned to liquor, first you’d give an absurd taste in my tongue, 2 seconds and now i think you taste great. and unlike coffee and milk, you have you’re own spirit and personality and i can have consecutive shots of you in a day, and you’d eventually give me this intense, good feeling and when i’ve had too much of you, you make me dizzy, slur my speech, and all of my inhibitions are expressed easily with you. then you’d knock me down but with a grin in my face that would apparently show my satisfaction of you, and the joy i have with you.
alcoholic na ako..haha
---remember this berry?
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worry no more....
fhem18 Fri Mar 05, 2010 2:22 am
don't worry for what will come tomorrow....
just work hard today...
and leave yesterday a pleasant memory...
winks
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TOKYO ROCKZ ♫♫
just work hard today...
and leave yesterday a pleasant memory...
winks
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TOKYO ROCKZ ♫♫
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Re: compositions
Lohiau Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:45 pm
fhem18 wrote:don't worry for what will come tomorrow....
just work hard today...
and leave yesterday a pleasant memory...
winks
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nice nak!
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hehehe...
fhem18 Sat Mar 06, 2010 3:38 am
i hope hindi yan plagiarism, (hahah...mali un una...toinks) kasi bgla nalang pumaxok sa isip q habang nakahiga aq ....hahaha... senti mode??? nah
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pain of a writer
Lohiau Sat Mar 06, 2010 3:47 am
grains of sweat are dripping from my face
i want to write something
but i can't write a thing
when i think of something to write,
words come flashing to my mind
transported by the flowing vessels of blood in my veins
into my bleak brain
this is why as i try to write something,
a vacuum space was born..
--hahaha ito ang walang maisip xD
i want to write something
but i can't write a thing
when i think of something to write,
words come flashing to my mind
transported by the flowing vessels of blood in my veins
into my bleak brain
this is why as i try to write something,
a vacuum space was born..
--hahaha ito ang walang maisip xD
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waw
fhem18 Sun Mar 07, 2010 7:55 pm
_off topic_ muna, awt @dad wow dad heheheh
as in wow... you write very well... inspired uh?
as in wow... you write very well... inspired uh?
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QUITE HARD....
fhem18 Sun Mar 07, 2010 8:04 pm
SoMeTiMeS LOVE AfFeCtIoN oR INTIMATE LoVe Is SeLf-SeEkInG aNd Or SeLf-CeNtErEd.
It DiReCtS yOu In VaIn, It LeAdS yOuR gOaLs To NoThInG.
YOu OuGhT tO uSe WiSdOm InStEaD oF eMoTiOnS,
FoR iF yOu SuCcEeD,
ThE bEtTeR rEwArD wiLL bE gIvEn OtHeR tHaN tHaT oF wHaT yOu DeSiRe...
_hehehe...negative? la lang... these phrases just popped in my head...hehe,probably, either useful or not, this tidbits is what makes me look forward...keeps me goin', day by day...
It DiReCtS yOu In VaIn, It LeAdS yOuR gOaLs To NoThInG.
YOu OuGhT tO uSe WiSdOm InStEaD oF eMoTiOnS,
FoR iF yOu SuCcEeD,
ThE bEtTeR rEwArD wiLL bE gIvEn OtHeR tHaN tHaT oF wHaT yOu DeSiRe...
_hehehe...negative? la lang... these phrases just popped in my head...hehe,probably, either useful or not, this tidbits is what makes me look forward...keeps me goin', day by day...
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FOE HIM....♥♥♥
fhem18 Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:32 pm
When u saw him
u can perceive a deep tone from his head
and a vast serenity within his core.
That u need thousands of words to define his cordiality,
and hundreds of phrases to explain his immortality...
u can perceive a deep tone from his head
and a vast serenity within his core.
That u need thousands of words to define his cordiality,
and hundreds of phrases to explain his immortality...
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vacuum
Lohiau Tue Mar 09, 2010 3:11 am
her name resounds at the back of my mind
her voice echoes the empty space in my heart
her absence causes me to be nothing
my hand longs for hers
my lips wants to kiss hers
i am
but an empty vacuum
in a world of nothingness
suffering the throbbing loneliness
of her absence
--emotero?
@fhem,thanks nak!
kaw nga din naman magaling magcompose
her voice echoes the empty space in my heart
her absence causes me to be nothing
my hand longs for hers
my lips wants to kiss hers
i am
but an empty vacuum
in a world of nothingness
suffering the throbbing loneliness
of her absence
--emotero?
@fhem,thanks nak!
kaw nga din naman magaling magcompose
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_OFF TOPIC_
fhem18 Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:59 pm
@dad ngeks..di poh...
wow, kakakilig mga kinocompost u dad for mom...hehehe... couples couples... gl gl... you look good together... I meant, figuratively...
wow, kakakilig mga kinocompost u dad for mom...hehehe... couples couples... gl gl... you look good together... I meant, figuratively...
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nice couz
naoki Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:54 am
Lohiau wrote:grains of sweat are dripping from my face
i want to write something
but i can't write a thing
when i think of something to write,
words come flashing to my mind
transported by the flowing vessels of blood in my veins
into my bleak brain
this is why as i try to write something,
a vacuum space was born..
--hahaha ito ang walang maisip xD
--at school he has a title 'pen of fire'
the best writer in the whole region..
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rock
naoki Fri Mar 12, 2010 3:03 am
Lohiau wrote:miya milk…mei coffee…gail liquor
when i was a child, i always thought that milk was the best for me, but then as months passes by she doesn’t get sweeter, she turns sour and unlikely, and she surely upsets my stomach, now i dread her as if i was lactose intolerant.
when i though that i was a grown up, i tried to stick with coffee. it was different from milk, for it is brown and it has a unique sweetness. day after day i absorb her until my nerves aren’t feeling so good and she seems to give me anxiety which is awful, and makes my tummy acidic so i had to avoid her.
not a month to pass i turned to liquor, first you’d give an absurd taste in my tongue, 2 seconds and now i think you taste great. and unlike coffee and milk, you have you’re own spirit and personality and i can have consecutive shots of you in a day, and you’d eventually give me this intense, good feeling and when i’ve had too much of you, you make me dizzy, slur my speech, and all of my inhibitions are expressed easily with you. then you’d knock me down but with a grin in my face that would apparently show my satisfaction of you, and the joy i have with you.
alcoholic na ako..haha
---remember this berry?
man you rock like hell!
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Re: compositions
meligail Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:18 pm
Lohiau wrote:miya milk…mei coffee…gail liquor
when i was a child, i always thought that milk was the best for me, but then as months passes by she doesn’t get sweeter, she turns sour and unlikely, and she surely upsets my stomach, now i dread her as if i was lactose intolerant.
when i though that i was a grown up, i tried to stick with coffee. it was different from milk, for it is brown and it has a unique sweetness. day after day i absorb her until my nerves aren’t feeling so good and she seems to give me anxiety which is awful, and makes my tummy acidic so i had to avoid her.
not a month to pass i turned to liquor, first you’d give an absurd taste in my tongue, 2 seconds and now i think you taste great. and unlike coffee and milk, you have you’re own spirit and personality and i can have consecutive shots of you in a day, and you’d eventually give me this intense, good feeling and when i’ve had too much of you, you make me dizzy, slur my speech, and all of my inhibitions are expressed easily with you. then you’d knock me down but with a grin in my face that would apparently show my satisfaction of you, and the joy i have with you.
alcoholic na ako..haha
---remember this berry?
yes jam q... hmmmmwa...
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who can never forget this^^
meligail Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:22 pm
I watched a Butterfly today,
She seemed to know the right way.
She would flutter here and flutter there
And then she landed on my chair.
The sunlight glistened off her beautiful wings
And I swear I heard her begin to sing.
Her colors were all purples and pinks
And I could feel an emptiness in me begin to sink.
A Coldness in my heart began to melt
And a warmness replaced it, which I have never felt.
With one last chorus she fluttered high
I thought if I lost her I just might die.
Then I heard a voice, crystal clear
You shall never loose me; I will always be near.
So I have planted a butterfly garden you see,
For a butterfly must always be free.
And I watch my butterfly every day,
So that I too, now know the way.
butterfly
bat i2 ndi pa nila2gay d2???
She seemed to know the right way.
She would flutter here and flutter there
And then she landed on my chair.
The sunlight glistened off her beautiful wings
And I swear I heard her begin to sing.
Her colors were all purples and pinks
And I could feel an emptiness in me begin to sink.
A Coldness in my heart began to melt
And a warmness replaced it, which I have never felt.
With one last chorus she fluttered high
I thought if I lost her I just might die.
Then I heard a voice, crystal clear
You shall never loose me; I will always be near.
So I have planted a butterfly garden you see,
For a butterfly must always be free.
And I watch my butterfly every day,
So that I too, now know the way.
butterfly
bat i2 ndi pa nila2gay d2???
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ehem ehem....
fhem18 Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:42 pm
buti pa si dad nahanap n nya butterfly nya....heheheheh...
san kea butterfly q? ahahahah....
my crush was taken.... already
hahahah... asa paq... ouch^^
san kea butterfly q? ahahahah....
my crush was taken.... already
hahahah... asa paq... ouch^^
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meligail Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:21 am
xempre nmn jam q... i should post it here!!! it's a poem u made for me also...
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para kai berry..thank you
Lohiau Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:12 pm
i used to have a frozen heart, buried deeply in the dark; and then you came, your smiles were as warm as a flame, hold me close to your burning embrace, melt this frozen heart with your feverish grace.~
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^^ nice
naoki Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:19 pm
Lohiau wrote:i used to have a frozen heart, buried deeply in the dark; and then you came, your smiles were as warm as a flame, hold me close to your burning embrace, melt this frozen heart with your feverish grace.~
you really deserve the title pen of fire[u]
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Silver MOTOROLA W230 Cellphone
naoki Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:22 pm
Has drowned at the Rendezvous beach villa on March 21,2010.
She got drunk and recklessly jumped off into the water, oblivious that she was, even though influenced by liquor, is still an electronic devise. Her owner Naoki, tried to save her immediately by doing CPR, so she went to a comma for 1 day, and died. March 22, 2010.
This event was a tragic loss for her Naoki, he is having her funeral started today and invites all of the mobiles that was once in her directory to visit her for the last time.
She got drunk and recklessly jumped off into the water, oblivious that she was, even though influenced by liquor, is still an electronic devise. Her owner Naoki, tried to save her immediately by doing CPR, so she went to a comma for 1 day, and died. March 22, 2010.
This event was a tragic loss for her Naoki, he is having her funeral started today and invites all of the mobiles that was once in her directory to visit her for the last time.
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sorry
Lohiau Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:25 pm
i was there when that tragic incident happened. even though i was quite DRUNK that time, i still tried to use "CPR"(but that didn't work). sorry dude., i failed to save your Silver MOTOROLA W230 Cellphone.
what have we learned?
-CELLPHONES DON'T REALLY KNOW HOW TO SWIM. ...
didn't even try teaching them how to swim
what have we learned?
-CELLPHONES DON'T REALLY KNOW HOW TO SWIM. ...
didn't even try teaching them how to swim
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thanks man
naoki Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:29 pm
thank you for trying to save her that day man, i know you did your best and your first aid skills are unquestionable.
yes, let us see the bright side of this circumstance,
i know life has meaning and human beings have freedom and will to find meaning under all circumstance even the most miserable.
i know, if we had exchange places, i was the one who drowned and died, she would not bare the pain of loosing and she wouldn't make it. but i can make it, so its better off.
yes, the learning is that i finally had validated that cellphones can't swim. and i will try to find a derivative this summer season. thank you for your sympathy.
yes, let us see the bright side of this circumstance,
i know life has meaning and human beings have freedom and will to find meaning under all circumstance even the most miserable.
i know, if we had exchange places, i was the one who drowned and died, she would not bare the pain of loosing and she wouldn't make it. but i can make it, so its better off.
yes, the learning is that i finally had validated that cellphones can't swim. and i will try to find a derivative this summer season. thank you for your sympathy.
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Lohiau Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:36 pm
the phone drowned and died, and the only thing that is left are memories.
good thing.. you're some guy who has some logo-therapeutic attitude. ^^
CHEEEERS!
good thing.. you're some guy who has some logo-therapeutic attitude. ^^
CHEEEERS!
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